Survive The Onset

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Tony’s Jeep idled at the curb in the grey wash before sunrise, engine rumbling low.

The Wrangler was older, black paint dulled by the desert sun and highway grit, but Tony trusted it the way he trusted his rifle. The rear cargo area was packed tight with bags, and a small cooler with cold water bottles was buckled into the middle seat in the back.

He checked the time, then glanced up at Hutch’s apartment window.

A light flicked off behind the set of blinds.

A minute later the door opened and Hutch came out carrying a duffel bag in one hand and wearing a backpack. Civilian clothes didn’t make him look less military. They just made him look like a soldier on his day off, which was somehow more noticeable. He tossed the bags into the rear cargo area and strapped them tightly.

Tony leaned an elbow out the window. “You think my driving is that bad?”

Hutch chuckled. “No. I just think you’re that excited to get home.”

Tony laughed. “You’re not wrong.”

Hutch grinned as he pulled the last strap tight. “Thanks for asking me along, J. This’ll be fun.”

Tony nodded, “Glad you can make it, bud. It’ll be fun.”

Hutch climbed into the passenger seat and buckled his seatbelt.

Tony shifted into drive and eased away from the curb. Phoenix was barely awake. Streetlights hummed over empty intersections. A few early commuters drifted through the city with the blank faces of people whose bodies had not yet agreed to the day.

For a while they drove in silence.

Then Hutch said, “Caught the news last night.”

Tony kept his eyes forward. “Yeah?”

“Lots of talking about the virus outbreak in Asia,” Hutch said. “It looked pretty severe. They were calling it ‘fast-moving’. Hospitals and law enforcement were getting overwhelmed. Quarantines in a couple cities. The military was being brought in to assist.”

Tony’s hands tightened on the wheel. “That’s what Lieutenant Mitchell was talking about yesterday.”

“Yeah.”

Asia was far away. But bringing in the military meant it was serious. It meant they were trying to get ahead of something.

Hutch continued, voice even. “They had wild footage. Reporters in masks. Police in riot gear– crowds pushing against barricades.”

“Sounds like a movie.” Tony said.

Hutch nodded.

“Think we get called back?” Hutch asked.

Tony glanced over. Hutch’s face was calm, but his eyes were awake.

Tony’s jaw tightened. “I hope not. If we get called back, it means this problem is much worse than we’re thinking.”

Both men sat in silence for a moment.

The sun climbed slowly as they drove. The desert widened, then flattened, then gave way to long stretches of open highway and distant hills. They pulled the Wrangler into a gas station to fill up. Hutch came back from the store with junk food and coffee.

“Funyuns.” Hutch said, dropping the bag into Tony’s lap. “For morale.”

“You are a good man.” Tony smiled as he pulled back out onto the highway.

They drove and ate in silence for a few minutes.

* * *

By the time they got to Long Beach, the sun was high in the sky. The Wrangler cruised through familiar streets beneath palm trees and blue, cloudless skies. The air smelled like a combination of saltwater and someone’s backyard grill. Tony had forgotten how quickly California made him feel at home.

Michael’s house was on a quiet residential street, modest but clean. It was the same house where their parents had raised them. Same fence. Same driveway. Same front steps.

Tony barely had the engine cut before the front door swung open.

Michael came off the porch at a run.

“TONY!”

He hit Tony hard enough to knock the breath out of him. Not a greeting. A claim.

Tony stumbled back, gripping him tight. ”Easy,” Tony laughed.

“Absolutely not!” Michael grinned.

Michael pulled back just enough to look at him and then hugged him again, tighter. He was twenty-four now, but there was still something young in the force of his love. Tony felt it in his chest like guilt and relief at the same time.

When Michael finally stepped back, his eyes were bright.

“You disappear for months,” he said, “and then you show up and expect me to act chill?”

“I never expect you to act chill.” Tony chuckled and held him tighter for a second.

His hair was longer than Tony remembered, but still the same genuine smile.

Tony pulled back and looked at him properly. There was something in Michael’s face now: a steadiness that hadn’t been there two years ago when their parents died. When Michael was twenty-two and broken and had to figure out how to be an adult alone.

“I’ve missed you, brother,” Tony said.

Michael’s eyes glistened. “Me too.”

Michael turned toward Hutch, “Hutch! Long time no see.”

Hutch offered his hand. Michael ignored it and pulled him into a hug too. Hutch froze for a half beat, obviously startled, then joined Michael’s embrace, patting him on the back, as if confirming the hug was legitimate.

Michael stepped back and said, far too casually, “So… before you two get comfortable, let’s go to the backyard.”

Tony narrowed his eyes. “What did you do?”

Michael’s grin turned mischievous. “Let’s go.”

They followed him through the house. Faint music grew louder as they approached. The delicious smell of grilled meat grew stronger. Tony crossed the threshold into the backyard – and stopped.

People were everywhere.

A handful of Tony’s oldest friends stood around the patio with beers in hand, laughing, shouting his name as soon as they saw him. Someone yelled, “Look who finally decided to come back!” Another voice: “About damn time!”

Tony felt the moment hit him. It was unexpected. A true surprise. He felt something in his chest. Not sadness. Not nostalgia. Something cleaner.

Belonging.

Michael’s face was bright with satisfaction. “Surprise.”

Tony shook his head slowly, smiling despite himself. “You little bastard.”

Michael laughed, then turned to and shouted across the group to Memo. “Memo! Are those burgers ready yet?”

The afternoon unfolded in warm, noisy fragments.

Tony leaned against the patio wall, beer in hand, fielding questions he answered carefully. He didn’t overplay the war stories. He gave the truth in measured pieces. His answers were enough to satisfy curiosity without turning the day into a memorial.

He laughed with the guys the way he used to. Real laughter. He checked in on people’s lives: jobs, kids, relationships, heartbreaks. He remembered names and details that surprised even him.

JoeJoe hadn’t changed much. Same broad shoulders. Same big heart. He cornered Tony near the cooler with a beer already in hand.

“Man, it’s good to see you, Tony,” JoeJoe said. The nickname was old – from high school football, when there were three Joeys and they’d all needed differentiation. “I saw you recently got stationed in Arizona?”

“Yeah. About eight months ago now. It’s just a training complex. Nothing glamorous. What about you? Still at that construction gig?”

JoeJoe’s smile shifted. It was still there, but something underneath it tightened.

“Still there,” he nodded. “Might not be much longer though. They’re talking about making cuts. Restructuring.” He took a sip. “Could be looking for work by the end of the year.”

Tony recognized the tone. JoeJoe was worried but trying not to show it. The construction job was solid income for him. It was reliable. Losing it would be significant.

“You got a plan?” Tony asked.

“Not yet.”

Tony offered. “I know we’re hiring on the base. Civilian contractor positions. I’ll send you some info when I get back to the base.”

“Appreciate that, brother. But hey. No more talking about work. Tonight, I’m drinking free beer in your honor.”

He raised his bottle. Tony raised his in return.

Tony made his way over to the grill, where Memo was hard at work. Grilling for over twenty hungry people wasn’t easy.

“Michael convinced you to come over and cook for us, huh?” Tony grinned.

Memo snorted, “Ha! He said YOU were going to pay me $500 to cook!”

Both men laughed and hugged. Memo was Tony’s oldest friend. “I’m glad you’re here, bro.”

“It’s good to see you. Michael looks good.”

Tony followed his gaze. Michael was laughing at something Hutch had said.

“Yeah,” Tony said softly. “He does.”

Vic and JoeJoe joined them a moment later carrying unopened beers. “Who needs a beer?”

The four men laughed like old times. At one point Vic slapped Tony on the shoulder and said, “Jeez bro. You’ve been hitting the gym I see.”

Tony smiled, uncomfortable with the praise but knowing Vic meant it.

JoeJoe took the opportunity to crack a joke, “He’s just trying to catch up to me.” He flexed his arms, which brought a chorus of whistles and cheers.

Tony looked at them. Their faces were older since the last time he’d seen them, but they were still unmistakably the guys. He felt something inside him loosen.

Hutch stayed near enough to be a part of things. He didn’t dominate the space and he didn’t hover. He simply existed in that calm, steady way that made people comfortable without knowing why. When someone asked him about the military, he answered plainly and then redirected the conversation back to them with a smile.

As the afternoon settled into evening, people filtered out. Hugs, handshakes, and half-promises to stay in touch were exchanged. The noise softened. The backyard lights clicked on, warm and yellow, casting gentle pools of light over the patio.

Eventually, only six remained: Tony, Hutch, Michael, JoeJoe, Vic, and Memo.

Memo was quieter than the others, content to sit back and watch. He’d always been the observer.

Tony sat down beside him.

“You good?” Tony asked.

Memo took a sip of beer before answering. “Yeah, man. Just… it’s good to see you. Feels like we don’t get these moments anymore.”

“Getting old,” Tony said lightly.

“Nah.” Memo’s voice shifted. “Getting real. You know? Responsibilities. Work. Life doesn’t stop for nostalgia.”

Memo had a daughter. Tony remembered that from a text years ago. Eleven or twelve now? He was raising her mostly alone since the divorce.

“How’s… ” Tony started.

“Lucia. She’s good.” Memo smiled, and it was a genuine smile. “She’s into soccer. Just made the all-star team. I’m coaching again this season.”

There was pride in his voice.

“That’s good, man,” Tony said, genuinely smiling.

Memo nodded slowly. “Thanks. It’s just… some days I feel like I’m barely keeping up. Work, Lucia, trying not to be the asshole her mom says I am.” He looked at Tony. “Probably sounds stupid compared to what you deal with.”

“It doesn’t, bro.” Tony said. “I bet it’s hard being a single dad. Does she see her mom much?”

Memo nodded, “She sees her every other weekend. But she’s with my parents this weekend. They wanted her for a weekend, so I dropped her off there on my way over.”

A deck of cards appeared. A speaker played old music at low volume. Beers clinked. Laughter came easier now, worn smooth by time and comfort.

Michael dealt with theatrical seriousness. “No cheating…”

“I don’t cheat,” Memo said.

Vic laughed. “Not according to your ex wife!”

The men joked hard and laughed easily. Old friendships picked up right where they left off.

Tony watched his brother move through the group, talking, joking, taking little shots at everyone without malice. Michael was warm in the way some people just are, as if he’d been built to keep rooms – and friendships – alive.

Between hands, Michael’s expression shifted. He was staring at his phone.

“Oh, I meant to tell you,” Michael said to Tony. His voice was casual, but Tony caught the tension underneath. “My friends were supposed to stop by tonight. Rick, Drew, and Eric went camping yesterday up in the mountains. They said they’d swing by here after they got back, but…” He trailed off, checking his phone again. “Nothing. Their phones all go straight to voicemail.”

Tony looked up. “How long has it been?”

“They left yesterday morning,” Michael admitted. “I texted them this morning and no answer. Which is weird because Rick obsesses over his phone. Always has.”

JoeJoe frowned. “They probably just lost service. Those mountains up there don’t get much service.”

“Yeah. That’s true…” Michael didn’t sound convinced.

Tony felt the shift in his own attention. The tactical part of his brain, the part that never fully relaxed, engaged.

Vic shrugged his shoulders. “They’re probably just hungover and ignoring everyone.”

Memo snorted. “That’s what I’d do.”

Michael smiled, but it didn’t fully reach his eyes.

Tony leaned back in his chair and looked at the faces around him. Men he trusted. Men who’d known him before rank and deployments and grief. Hutch beside him, calm as always. And Michael, worried about friends he couldn’t reach, uncertainty flickering across his face.

Tony’s mind made the decision before his mouth did.

“We should go tomorrow,” he said.

Everyone looked at him.

“Camping.” Tony added, already anticipating the reaction. “Just… get out of the city. Relax. Enjoy some time together. If we pass through the campground, we can check it. See if they’re there. Make sure everyone’s all right.”

Michael’s face brightened immediately, relief spilling through. “Seriously?”

Tony nodded. “Seriously.”

JoeJoe grinned. “Camping? Like actual camping? You gonna teach us how to be Bear Grylls?”

Hutch’s mouth twitched. “Don’t insult Bear Grylls like that.”

Memo laughed. “More like Smokey the Bear.”

Tony continued, looking at Michael, “Don’t they have a range out there too? I’ll bring the firearms and show you guys gun safety, handling, and a little marksmanship. Hutch can give you tips on survival and fire craft.”

Hutch lifted his beer in agreement. “I can work with that.”

Vic nodded slowly, already sold. “I’m in.”

JoeJoe slapped the table. “Hell yes. I’ve been wanting to learn to shoot.”

Memo raised his bottle. “To getting away from normal life for once.”

They clinked beers.

On the other side of the patio, the television droned softly, unnoticed. A news anchor’s voice rose and fell with practiced urgency.

“…breaking news… outbreak initially reported in the Chinese city of Chongqing… unconfirmed reports in cities across Europe and North America, including Los Angeles and New York… tensions high… sporadic reports of violence…”

No one looked up.

Cards slapped on the table. Music drifted through the backyard. Laughter came in waves.

“…local authorities are asking the public to stay calm… remain indoors… this is a developing story…”

The words floated into the night and vanished, swallowed by the simple, stubborn warmth of friends who had waited a long time to be together again.

No one listened.

2 Responses

  1. At this point I feel as though I’m struggling to keep going … that I want a reason to get through the narrative. I keep remembering my struggle with Frank Herbert’s DUNE. I think I began that book seven times before I forced myself to get through the first hundred pages … and then it captivated me! I still consider it one of the best works of fiction I’ve ever read! What if … there was something that created a mystery; something that made me want to find out the answer/resolution? It could be bits of information Tony has [because of his rank] that give a glimpse of what might be coming, and he has to respond to it without letting the others know. These bits of information are communicated through a device only Tony has. Just a thought. I need something that makes the pages turn for me.

    1. I appreciate the feedback, Stu. I hear what you’re saying about adding some knowledge that Tony has about the outbreak. The problem is, this is a story about an uninformed group that doesn’t have information and is struggling both with the lack of information and with the horror befalling them. I feel that giving Tony specific information would compromise the narrative. As the story continues, the group learns more about the virus and responds to the information they learn. Hopefully you can continue pushing through my writing, but if you can’t, no worries. Thank you for trying! 🙂

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